Empty Nest, Prologue and chapters 1-12
Okay, so here's the deal. I wrote an arc that above-and-beyond fulfilled my NaNo, and posting a piece of it every day was becoming beyond tedious. So here's the whole thing, as much of it as I've got done. Prologue and Chapters 1-4 were already posted, but that's okay, it's less than half of what's done. Comments would be most appreciated, especially if they're given for each section.
The overall arc is NC-17, but unlike Domesticity, it's not one lemon per chapter. Some chapters are more mild than others, and the ratings are included within. If porn's not your thing, you can skip the porny chapters and still be able to follow what's going on. I think. Hmm ...
SailorMac beta'd the entire thing, save for Chapter 12, which I was too impatient to post to send to her. She's amazing for putting up with me through the writing of this thing. Oh, and it's not complete, in case that's not clear. There will be more of it, though I don't know how much more.
Okay, I'm shutting up now. Sorry. Go read my fics, please?
Empty Nest:
Prologue: Prodigal SonsChapter 1: AwakeningChapter 2: True TestChapter 3: Amestris PieChapter 4: WaitingChapter 5: AllowanceChapter 6: ChangeChapter 7: TruceChapter 8: Out AloneChapter 9: Growing PainsChapter 10: ResentmentChapter 11: Back to NormalChapter 12: Perspective Current Mood: 
accomplished 
Eh ...
amused