Talk:Annan command
Add topicLatest comment: 6 days ago by ะะตะบะพัะตะป in topic GA review
 | Annan command has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 5, 2026. (Reviewed version). |
GA review
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Nominator: Min968 (talk ยท contribs) 03:09, 3 August 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: ะะตะบะพัะตะป (talk ยท contribs) 04:46, 3 August 2026 (UTC)
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- "The new dynasty retained its capital at Thฤng Long." it looks like Thฤng Long is another name for Hanoi. Could you please indicate that in the text?
- "The Jiajing Emperor responded by appointing Qiu Luan as commander-in-chief and Mao Bowen as military advisor". Please explain what area or mission these officers were in charge of (Ming China, ฤแบกi Viแปt, etc). Also give the Chinese characters for Mao Bowen.
- "This event marked the Ming dynasty's decision to demote ฤแบกi Viแปt from a vassal state (ๅ; guo; quแปc) to a subordinate territory (้ฝ็ตฑไฝฟๅธ; dutongshisi; ฤรด thแปng sแปฉ ty)." Does the source indicate why the Ming demoted ฤแบกi Viแปt? Was there some particular military or political action from ฤแบกi Viแปt that angered the Ming?
- Crawling barefoot before the seated Ming authority, he presented them copies of his tax registers and other documents, ceded some disputed border territory, and agreed to the nominal downgrading of his country from guo to a native chieftaincy (dutongshisi)
- "... all under the authority of the commandant". Could you briefly explain the role of a provincial commandant?
- "Mแบกc ฤฤng Dung was appointed as the commandant of Annan (ๅฎๅ้ฝ็ตฑไฝฟ; An Nam ฤรด thแปng sแปฉ) with a second-class hereditary rank". How did a commandant with a second-class hereditary rank compare to other titles in the Ming court, such as an officer of first-class hereditary rank?
- "The Lรช rulers maintained the title of commandant of Annan until 1647, when the Southern Ming reinstated Lรช Thแบงn Tรดng as king of Annan." Could you give the dates of Lรช Thแบงn Tรดng's rule?
ะะตะบะพัะตะป (talk) 03:35, 5 August 2026 (UTC)
- @ะะตะบะพัะตะป All done. Min968 (talk) 04:26, 5 August 2026 (UTC)
- I will pass the article. ะะตะบะพัะตะป (talk) 09:44, 5 August 2026 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
