Talk:Khary Penebaker
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[edit]This article reads far too much like a personal campaign website. Needs to be rewritten in encyclopedic prose. Mike Helms (talk) 18:45, 6 January 2017 (UTC)
Proposed updates to reflect post-2016 activities
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Hello, I'd like to propose several updates to this article. The subject has been involved in significant publicly documented events since 2016 that are not currently reflected. All proposed additions are sourced to reliable, independent publications. I have a conflict of interest with this article and am requesting edits through the talk page per policy.
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1. Fix introduction (factual correction)[edit]The current introduction describes Penebaker as "a member of the Democratic National Committee." The DNC Representative section of the article itself states he stepped down in June 2023. The introduction should be updated for consistency. Current:
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2. Add "2020 presidential elector" section[edit]Penebaker served as a presidential elector for Wisconsin's 5th Congressional District in the 2020 United States presidential election. This was his second time as an elector, having also been selected in 2016. His experience casting his vote, particularly his emotional reaction to seeing Kamala Harris's name on the vice presidential ballot, was covered by NPR affiliate WUWM and the Milwaukee Independent. In 2022, Penebaker was a named plaintiff in Penebaker et al. v. Hitt et al. (Dane County Circuit Court, Case No. 2022CV1178), a civil lawsuit brought by Wisconsin's lawful 2020 presidential electors against ten individuals who posed as fraudulent electors. The case was filed by Law Forward and co-counsel. On December 6, 2023, the parties reached a settlement in which the fraudulent electors acknowledged their votes "were part of an effort to overturn the results of the 2020 election." Sources:
3. Expand Career section[edit]The current Career section mentions industry awards but does not name Penebaker's companies. Proposed addition after the first sentence: In 2002, Penebaker founded Penebaker Enterprises, a commercial roofing and sheet metal contracting firm in Milwaukee. The company completed work on the Milwaukee City Hall restoration project and received the 2004 Supplier of the Year Award from the Wisconsin Supplier Development Council and the 2010 Minority Business Contractor of the Year Award from the Daily Reporter. He later served as president of Roofed Right America, a specialty roofing contractor. Sources (already cited in article):
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4. Add TIME magazine contribution[edit]Penebaker is a contributor to TIME magazine, where he wrote about his mother's suicide and his own experience with suicidal ideation. Source:
5. Add Planned Parenthood board membership[edit]Penebaker serves on the board of directors of Planned Parenthood of Wisconsin and on the board of WAVE (Wisconsin Anti-Violence Effort). Source:
6. Update external links[edit]Propose adding an External links section: |
Thank you for considering these updates. Kharyp (talk) 15:10, 6 March 2026 (UTC)
Reply 22-MAY-2026
[edit]- Your edit request could not be reviewed because the claims made do not contain ref tags. When proposing edit requests, it is important to highlight in the text, through the use of ref tags, which specific sources are doing the referencing for each claim. The point of these ref tags is to allow the reviewer and readers to check that the material is sourced; that point will be lost if the references are not clearly placed. In the collapsed section below titled Request edit examples, I have illustrated two: The first shows how the edit request was submitted; the second shows how requests should be submitted in the future.
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In the example above there are three references provided for the stated claims. But the text does not indicate, through the use of ref tags, which reference applies to which claim. Your edit request similarly does not provide ref tags indicating which source goes where. The links between material and their source references must be clearly made, as shown in the next example below:
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- Kindly reformulate your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request below this reply post at your earliest convenience. Regards, Spintendo 17:25, 22 May 2026 (UTC)
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