premise

You are a bounty hunter.

Responsible for taking in rogue supernaturals, you work for IAOS—the international agency of supernaturals—where, alongside your best friend and partner, you two have quickly become the best hunting duo of the branch.

After a particularly tricky hunt, you brief your boss, Caine Atheron, and come back to work the next day to find that he has mysteriously disappeared overnight, the company is now in the hands of his best friend, Sebastian Mai.

And though no one else seems to question it, something tells you that there's more to the story.

With bounty cases rising at an alarming rate and a second mystery unfolding, you and your ragtag team of allies set out to find the truth.

But as you go further and further, the secrets you uncover begin to make you question: who... or what exactly are you fighting for?

romance options

THE BEST FRIEND.

Arion/Arden/Adair Devereux is your best friend and work partner at IAOS of four years. Reliable and loyal, A is always by your side and there when you need a good laugh. With an easygoing manner and sarcastic sense of humour, A is loved by all, though their greatest friend is you.

Will you blur the lines of friendship?

THE RIVAL.

Blane Rekner is a fellow hunter at IAOS and your rival. Blane despises you with a passion and will take every opportunity to make you look bad, often in the form of a snide remark. Cold and startlingly rude, Blane isn’t the most appealing person, but their loyalty and dedication make up for it.

Will you turn your tension into something more than hatred?

THE PARTNER.

Nikolas/Noele/Nolan Alves is Blane’s partner at IAOS. though often overlooked, with soft smiles and constant genuine kindness, N is someone you can count on when having a bad day. But don’t let that fool you, for N also has a strong will and disregard for being treated badly that will make you rethink double-crossing them.

Will you find something real in a sea of mistrust?

THE WARLOCK.

Kian/Kaia/Kai de Vries is a warlock you see out for their expertise. as an immortal, K has learned to keep their cards close to their chest and finds it difficult to trust. Their aloofness and blunt sense of humour may make them difficult to get along with at first, but once warmed up to you, K is a powerful ally that proves to have a great amount of depth.

Will you fall for someone you know you will have to one day leave behind?

THE BOUNTY.

Rylan Villanueva is a bounty you’ve previously failed to capture. A flirt through and through, Rylan’s signature moves are sharp smirks and quick winks, the signs of someone who enjoys the sight of someone flustered. Their sarcasm and charm often take up the forefront of their personality, but though seemingly shallow with their wandering eyes, Rylan’s bed remains empty, preferring to spend nights alone.

Will you find love with the very person you’ve been trained to hunt?

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I make regular updates and answer questions about the cast and game on my Tumblr. If you'd like to support me, I have Ko-Fi for a one-off donation and Patreon for those who wish to receive exclusive content.

On another note, if there are any errors or bugs you’d like to report, please email me (evertidings@gmail.com) as it is the best way for me to sort them out <3 

Updated 22 hours ago
StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.9 out of 5 stars
(1,469 total ratings)
Authorevertides
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsCharacter Customization, Dating Sim, LGBTQIA, No AI, Romance, Story Rich, Twine
Average sessionA few hours
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This is my 3rd replay and I'd just like to inform you that on Chapter 3.10 it won't let me get past the "The Lunch Room". The next option is on top and nothing happens when I tap on it. I've tried restarting the game too. It's the first time it has happened. 🥹

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CHAP 13 RELEASED TIME TO SEE MY WIFE NOELE 

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WOOHOO!

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The story's super well-written and I enjoyed it a lot. 


One thing though. In Blane's route, on the page where you can close the gap or tell her no, one of the sentences is "His/Her/Theirs doesn't deny it," when it should be "He/She/They doesn't deny it."


Aside from that, it's perfect. Can't wait for the next updates

Thanks! Fixed it now :)

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I haven't finished playing everyone's routes yet, but I wanted to let you know that I just woke up from a dream where I was having lunch with K and Rylan (specifically Kian and they/them Rylan). I think it is because I keep replaying the game over and over... Though I'm not complaining at all!! I am craving Thai food now though lol.


Anywho!!! A+ update, I cried because of K AND Blane a lot (my Ace4Ace heart loves them both so dearly) and I wanted to squeeze A like a squeaky toy. Do you think they would squeak like one?? I bet they would...


Time for N and Rylan now (best RO's for last!!!!) let's gooo.

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Ok this is eating me alive rn what cardinal sin did I commit to get downvoted this much help. I've been rereading my comment trying to make sure I didn't accidentally type something horribly offensive somehow??

If it's because my comment is edited, I edited it due to it having like 5 million typos (since I typed it out immediately after waking up from my dream.) If it's for some other reason, I am very confused. Is this the right game? This is When Twilight Strikes, right?? Did I misspell the characters names, because I swear I triple checked to be sure that I did not? Are people mad because I personally find N and Rylan to be the best RO's? I'm so sorry I just don't know if the problem is with my comment or not.

I know this is stupid, but I can't help feeling anxious that I did something bad to upset people! If I did then I will donate money to this game to make up for my error.

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I also don't know why you got downvoted. Sometimes people on the internet are just haters. All I can do is offer solidarity, and suggest that until people actually communicate with you, there's not much use guessing what they're thinking.

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Yes, I suppose you are right. I am just very airheaded and I know I sometimes word things strangely, so I was worried that my initial comment was confusing others! I do not want to accidentally cause harm or upset people.

But if that isn't the case here then there's really nothing I can do at the end of the day. Thank you for reassuring me <3 it really did help me feel better.

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The internet can be very overcritical sometimes, so I wouldn't stress about it! As the author, I thought your comment was quite funny and it's always great to hear that people are enjoying my game. Also love that you played multiple ROs!! I always encourage people to pick multiple characters so I'm happy that it worked haha <3

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Rylan's route is a rollercoaster. I don't know whether I should laugh or cry right now. But, your writing is truly magnificent. I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Both? Idk? Thank you haha <3

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After finishing all the romantic routes for ch13 all the characters I can officially say THEY ARE ALL SO GOOD 😋🔥 (Even though some of them left me wanting to cry)

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Eeek I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for playing!! (I also fixed the broken code that you pointed out).

YAY!!!!

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For all the (REAL ONES)people who locked K, kiss-less, reading other people's comments, feeling Some Kind of Way(TM) and/or possibly bleeding out:


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thank you. The therapist is very needed

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it was 😔

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HAHA so sorry about that !

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*squints* ...why don't I believe you 😂

Currently engaging in art therapy. You had me so in my Feels, I had to draw part of that K scene just to - Process my own emotions. lol (Stop being flattered - I'm mad at you I'm not, I adore you ripping my heart to shreds)

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ANOTHER  SPOILERS (CHAPTER 13- K) AHEAD! 


I WARNED YOU.




You know what? At this point just kill me, the K angst is HEAVY this chapter. I've tried to change my decisions up (argue and deflect but i am about to read it all over again) and the change in the dialogue? Amazing AND hurtful. I genuinely can't figure out what's going thru K's head, when it was said a talk about immortality i thought it would be something WAY different to be honest, i was not expecting THAT. The "Don't ever try to touch me again," Hurts so much my goddd. I have to say that from the 3 routes i tried (Rylan, Blane and now K) this has been my favorite, the emotions hit hard. i never have any idea how to end my comments...

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Ahh what a compliment! I'm so glad you liked it. My beta-testers and I had a long conversation about the two routes and how to tweak them to get these types of reactions out of players. Thank you for playing both! I loved reading your thoughts.

K is a tough one to crack but eventually you will get to smooch them <3

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I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS 😭😭 the wait is super worth it! Thank you so much!! rylan, my beloved :( i love himmm gosh this chapter hurts BUT I LOVED THE KISS AAAAAAA😭😭

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Thank you for playing!! I love Rylan's route so much even with the pain <3

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god i'm so glad i was born 2 days ago because i got chap 13 as my bday gift 😩😩🙏🙏🙏 i cannot get over squealing keyboard smashing and kicking my legs in glee because ts is 🔥🔥🔥

author-nim i love u pls always be in good health i bless u with lots of braincells and gobsmacking ideas and a 5 star sleep every night ✨️✨️✨️

p.s. BLANE OH MT GOD MY HONEYBUNCH SUGARPLUM ICING ON MY CUPCAKE POOKIE WOOKIE DOOKIE I LOVE YOOIUUUUUUOIII GRAAHHHHGGGGGRARRAGAGGAGAHHFFHFHG MARARAKRKKR BAROWOOFOWOOOF BARKKSARRKRK *foams at mouth*

HAHA happy belated birthday! I'm so glad you loved it <3

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SPOILERS FOR CHAPTER 13!!!








Well. I've only play Ryan's route for now and let me say some stuff. We got quite a lot of angst and finally got them (Rylan) to open up which i absolutely love and then we got a kiss odnslxibdkypdzdmhmhfkgm. The angst was delicious and how vulnerable they were omfg 😭😭. There's so many things we STILL don't know about them and i NEED, CRAVE to know more. I feel like I've said this too many times before but the characters are so well written and feel so real. 

okay i wrote that part before reading what happens after the kiss and AUTHOR WHEN I CATCH YOU. They did not just run away from us. They did not.  They did...  AND IT'S THE END OF THE CHAPTER?  I'm speechless. Please tell me not all of the routes are so angsty, give me some happiness 😭 Yet still, i love this if way too much. I don't really have any thoughts about it now other than how good the writing and the feelings are. The way the mc is written (their thoughts and feelings) is so good because it makes the player be in their shoes and feel the same things as them. I'll be back with my thoughts about the other routes once again. I wonder IF there's more variations of how the kiss plays out since this is my low friendship save 

A short comment. ABOUT Blane.


Give me more of Blane. I'm waiting. Genuinely. That was sweet. That was amazing. I love them. And i was NOT expecting a kiss.

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Anyone else struggling with their name suddenly changing to Hayden mid-game?😭

My name was written as Min-jun but after interacting with N in the training room my name suddenly changed to Hayden.

Also, I love the new update! Thank you🛐

That is so extremely odd, I don't know why it would be doing that! Did you recently restart the game?

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oooomg that romance lock was infinitely better than I ever imagined! I did Blane's normal route and loooved seeing all the small variations in each choice, it's so abundantly clear how much love you always put into writing this. can't wait to play the other routes <3

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I JUST FOUND TWO MORE VARIATIONS OF THE KISS I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHICH ONE I LIKE MOST YOU CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS

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Would you mind telling me how you found those 2 more variations please 🙏😔

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As far as I've explored there's six (counting the "kiss them" / "let them kiss you" as separate variants). One pair is when you cup their cheek, another is if you call their name then grab their wrist, and another is if you call their name then make an excuse. My personal favorites are the cup their cheek options and make an excuse / let them kiss you, but they're all sooo good!!

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Thank youuu! I personally love both of the variants but my favorite is the choice where you don't kiss since (for me) it has a bigger emotional impact even without the kiss there ❤️🥹 but i just love they fall into mc's arms, at least their angst ends happily not like K's...

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Oh I totally agree, it's so sweet just letting Blane know they're cared for without pushing the physicality of it too quickly. At the same time, it's so cute seeing them fully embrace it, especially when they initiate the kiss--it's so rare for them to even accept physical contact, much less do something so impulsive. Something about pouring their emotions into the kiss where words fail them is what gets me. 

K soldiers have nothing but my utmost respect, I could never. At least, not until their route is a bit further along, being constantly left on angst cliffhangers would kill me :( o7 to you guys frfr

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Aw thank you! I'm glad people are having fun finding the variations. They're like easter eggs haha. It was a lot of work to write but very worth seeing this thread :))

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This is so painful I got so close to locking in B`s romance but I missed the requirements by just a little bit

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THEE FEEELS OMG MY HEARTTTTTTTTTTT

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does anyone know how i can fix my relationship with supernatural to romance blane? i have 30/60 i think but i havent replayed in a while so i dont know which chapters to go to to fix it..

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I belive it's back in chapter one when it asks you what your perspective on supernaturals is just before you meet Rylan for the first time. The best option (the one that gives you the most positive relationship with supernatural beings) is "... agree with the latter. I have a lot of supernatural friends and none of them are evil." 

I hope this helps.

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Thanks! this did help and i replayed it but still am five points off,, i thought i selected all the good options, thank you for the reply anyway it did help!!

The easiest way is to choose "… agree with the latter. I have a lot of supernatural friends and none of them are evil" in Ch.1. 

After that, you should have enough points automatically but for good measure, offer to go first in Ch.2 when Quinn begins her healing process and choose "It'll be fun to get to know them" in Ch.5 since it gives a lot of points.

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ooh my godd... that was immaculate... 

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So glad you enjoyed!

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can someone pls help me w getting mirai to give mc the potion? i felt like i tried all choices and tried following Kristi advice but its not working 😭 

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oh wait, sorry to disappoint im not here giving the answer you wanted 😭😭 but POTION? WHAT POTION? I HAD NO IDEA THAT WAS POSSIBLE

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ye she can give us potion from what i last rember it doesn't help us in any chapters tho :'3

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a...a potion? how have i missed this... please do explain

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HEY I did some experimenting and found something. Try this;
-"Actually, yeah, there's alot wrong" 
-"A wine bottle,"
-"Because I can get you something you want in exchange."
-"Caine Atheron is missing,"
-Do you want him to be?
-Because no one else will 
-i thought you didnt want him to be found

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I will try this but what does it do?

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Mirai gives you a potion! Haven't had any flavour text on it yet but I'm guessing it's useful in future

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Correct!

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it didnt work 😭

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Hey! By any chance, At the 'crimson rouge's side exit.'  did you go right and pick up the pin? If you did, I think that was the issue, you have to go left and eavesdrop the convo! It should work now. If thats not the issue, let me know and I'll keep searching!

I had to replay because of requirement even though I chose every option and chance to step time with that one LI but it show up like I never chose those options And when I restart the game there is an bug now at chapter03.09 first you can't choose to go training anymore and can't go to Blane and problem too if I go to lap or to the cases the screen turns black and the game doesn't continue


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Hello! I'm not sure what the issue is since I did not touch this chapter when Ch.13 was released. You may have to clear your cache, cookies and any trace of the game before trying again. I assume you chose training and Blane on another playthrough, and the game is still remembering those choices.

Sorry I realized that a few minutes ago and was about to delete my comment out of embarrassment but you already answered then haha :') 

But still ty anyways 

Oh and ty for the update I couldn't play it yet since I need replay it but I'm sure it will be good 

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No problem! For your purposes, I also added a "Reset Game" button on the menu page, so if you're going to replay, please do so with that button so that none of your choices are remembered!

EDIT: This button does not work so I've since deleted it.

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Being excited to play the new chapter just to find out you don't have a SINGLE complete met requirement in ANYBODY'S route 🥲💔 SO HEARTBREAKING. Looks like I'll have to replay the whole thing, but oh well, not upset about that!

Hopefully it worked out for you!

Ugh all the choices I made and still can't romance the one of my choice cause I choose friendly interactions with others during other scenes. Even while flirting every chance I could.

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Refreshed and that fixed but now it says I still believe R committed the murder, but that wasn't the case before the refresh. Ugh

Refreshed again and it changed the stats all around to not met. Guess it's guessing if I did or not. Instead of going off the save. Looks like a forced restart. On Android.

I'm sorry to hear you're having trouble! Feel free to email me (evertidings@gmail.com) if you're still having issues, but it seems like your system is mixing up all your saves for some reason.

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IT'S HEERRREEE EEEEE I STAYED UP JUST FOR THIS I AM GONNA KISS EVERYONE YEYSYSYEYSYES YES YES

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hey! sorry if this idea has been brought up before or if you've already discarded the idea, but i'd been considering the chapter selector problems and came up with something - though i've no idea how plausible it is.

could you perhaps scan and save the statistics at the start of every chapter separately, then if someone wanted to replay a chapter, load in that chapter's statistics and go from there? if you had separate slots designated for each chapter, you could skip back to them if someone loaded up the chapter select without losing them.

again, not sure how plausible it is considering i haven't used twine nearly enough to say how it'd work, though i do plan to in the future. regardless, i hope this finds you well ^^

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I don't have the coding knowledge for that haha. But great idea.

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Hey! I love this game so much!! I was just wondering if it would be possible to place a chapter selector like the one that used to be at the start of chapter 13? I was just trying to go back and reread but it's very time-consuming/doesn't work. If you're too busy or it doesn't work then no worries!

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In truth, the chapter selector messes up the code really badly, since you're overwriting your remembered choices. There will be one at the end of Ch.14, as requested, but it's honestly not super ideal for the game statistics.

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No worries! Thanks anyway :)

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Omg i commented on this game 2 years ago, amazing to see how much it’s grown and how invested i STILL am in the story, great work writer! can’t wait for the update :))

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Thank you for sticking by! 2 years is crazy :)

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"my name never shows up anywhere haha" 
chapter 12:

.    .∧_∧           ∧_∧.

 (  `・ω・ )つ)゜Д゜)・゜

 (つ          r⊂        ⊂)'

 |           _つ ⊂_⊂ノ

 `し´

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idk if this question has come up before, but is there a good place to discuss theories? I have my head-canon about what is going on with the big mysteries, and I want to scream it from the rooftops but I don't want to spoil anybody ^^;

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Hmm, well I have no opposition to discussing theories here, especially since nothing has been confirmed or denied yet, but that'll become difficult once the truth comes out. Unfortunately, I shut down my Discord server a while back so there's no community for the story right now.

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i love, love this game so much like u dont even understand,, but i need to know if anyone else is having a glitch with the pronouns? like, when i choose any pronouns, "his", "their", "hers" won't show up, sometimes even just "him", "her", and "them" wont appear :(

That's super strange. Is it your personal pronouns you're talking about or the ROs'? Also, which platform are you playing on?

personal pronouns! ive tried restarting the game and making new saves, but the pronouns just dont appear even with new or old saves. im also playing on laptop!

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I looked into my code and unfortunately, I can't find any issue. I'm assuming it's something on your end then. I would recommend deleting the game from your Itch.io folder on your drive and redownloading it. Maybe with the new update (Chapter 13) it will be resolved too. Sorry!

no worries!!! i assumed as much sadly :( thank you so much for writing this amazing story! i'll try fixing this on my end 

I'm really sorry! Since you're the only person with this issue (as far as I can tell), I have no idea what it could be. Do your other textboxes work fine (i.e. entering your name)?

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Loving the story so far! And the enemies to lovers action! But I ran into an issue where volunteering for the briefing in Chapter 2 grants a lot of introvert points.

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Thank you! Could you point out the choice that you found issue with?

Going from chapter02.07 to chapter02.08a. The choice "Volunteer for the briefing."

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I believe I found the issue, thanks! I'll have that fixed for the next update :)

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Hi! I've read everything available. I'm eagerly awaiting the rest. Good job!

I just have one impression that keeps bothering me. The protagonist and his partner are presented as the best agents of an elite unit of bounty hunters. However, their dialogues and actions mainly reveal incompetence, uncertainty, lack of knowledge, and a lack of the manner of operation characteristic of a trained representative of the services. I find it difficult to identify with characters who are so inconsistent.

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Hi! This is a completely valid complaint and I will definitely take that into consideration. I've had similar doubts of my own as the game has gotten further along, so it's something we share consensus on. When I finish Book 1, this is something I plan to rectify as I go back and edit older passages. 

I appreciate the constructive criticism and how respectfully you delivered it! Thank you for playing regardless <3

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Ahhhh I just wanna say, I'm soo excited! I love this IF and really enjoy your writing, super excited for the rest ^^

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Thank you so much! I'm excited for the next phase <3

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Playing my Blane rival run and heard this song, thought it was very them.
Blane: You are glass, cold and brittle, so I never pushed too hard. Cause you break from so little and I cut myself on every shard. I wish that you were clearer and could see my point of view.
Vesper: You are glass, thick and blurry, so you see the worst parts first. You're a pain and I worry that your temper is always primed to burst. You wished that I was clearer and could see your point of view, but if I'm glass then I'm a mirror so you're seeing only you.

love that song. also Vesper is a sick name

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Love the game! I'm sure you probably know about this, but I've noticed a bug. On the page after you make a choice that gains relationship with a companion, each time you close then open the relationship menu the bonus gets applied again (meaning you can increase approval all the way to 100% based off of one choice)
I'm someone who kinda compulsively checks my relationship menu meaning I unfairly gain approval when I shouldn't; is there a way to stop this from happening? 

(Oh, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next! Looking forwards to A's route :p)

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Hi! I'm well aware of this issue but unfortunately, I haven't yet figured out how to solve it. My coding knowledge isn't that advanced. It's definitely something I will look into at some point.

For now, I hope I can reassure you by saying that the romance points is only one aspect of unlocking a romance route, so it won't severely affect your chances. A huge part of it will also be choosing solo routes with your RO of choice.

hii i love this game so muchbtw is the new chapter being released this month?

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No, sorry! If you read my recent monthly update, you'll see that we're still a ways out.

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AHHH I LOVE THIS IF SO MUCH! It's so cool, and I love where it's going. As well as the characters! They're all so cool! In the future would there be polyamorous routes? I wanna romance them all lol </3

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Thank you so much! I'm 50/50 on whether poly routes will happen in the future, but if they do, it'll be very down the line. I want to make sure I focus my time on the main five routes right now before I divert my energy to other things <3

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why does bro want poly u can lit just go through each route brother ts is what greedy is personified lmao

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Yes I am also greedy I want both Arden and Rylan on the same route 

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Arion love of my life. As someone who has an ADHD partner in real life, the overthinking and need for reassurance are so accurate. It's not often i see those sides of adhd represented.

This is insanely good. Thank you for sharing your talents with the world. 🥰

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I'm so glad you think the representation is accurate! I'm happy to bring more awareness to ADHD and love that [A] reminds you of your partner (so cute)!!. Thank you for the lovely comment <3

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i love this IF so much :(( it’s very well written, and every time there’s a scene with rylan, i always tear up—especially the one in Chapter 10 where the OC and Rylan are on the rooftop :( aaaaa my shaylaaa

it’s a very, very good game! the way you write your characters is so admirable, and I can’t wait for the next chapter! <33

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Thank you so much!! I also love that scene <3

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