Hetalia Haiku

Blue eyes tilt skyward
Twisting wings above his head
He laughs- freedom rings

snow falls, covering
boughs with white-a desire
for warmth drives him on

nothing but tundra-
cold, unforgiving-but thoughts
of family heal

not enough-he still
lies in an endless sleep with
dreams of sunflowers

Smoky scent remains
Sweet apple in gold goblet
It's time to indulge.

[I dont have the proper icon gdi :< Also, LIIIVE, COMMUNITY! LIIIIIVE!!!]

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Pen scratches on paper
He heaves a sigh and
Lets the words flow out.

Vodka by his side
His heart skips a beat
"I love you" says shaking pen.

Soft sheepskin coat
Blended with snow
Eyed with cerise desire

Also, I wanted to share a link to a haiku "checklist" that I thought the lovely people of this comm would be interested in. It talks about how freeform haiku really is, and the beat scheme limitations are not always necessary (I actually played around with it a little bit in this one).

( It's not all 5-7-5 )

Man, I am hungry
I wish I have some pancakes
But Prussia ate them.

I'm better than him
And seriously nicer but
I'm invisible.

I talk in English
I can also talk in French
I am CANADA!!!!

My dearest brother
You always cause me such angst
Please put the pipe down

Years ago today,
Fighter planes zoomed overhead
Unexpected strike.

I like vampire tales
From Bram to Laurell. Screw Twilight.
I'm a Buffy fan.

-America

AN) "Bram" refers to Bram Stoker. "Laurell" refers to Laurell K. Hamilton. Her first 8 Anita Blake books are great examples of vampire literature, come to your own conclusions on everything after that.