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A Courser's Journey, Parts 1,2,3,4 and now 5. Spoilers
(I wrote this story based on the Fallout 4 Universe I created in my game.
Especially Diamond City has been buffed by multiple mods to be the metropolis lore paints it as.
3 times as many NPCs, 3 times as many shops, 3 times the size of a security force ( with different faces too), a barracks complex. a manufacturing complex. Fixed the M to F sex imbalance that exists in game, Much better armor, uniforms and weapons for DC Security which has morphed into a serious military instrument.
Now called Armed Forces of Diamond City or AFDC for short.
The story is 100% my own, but I had AI clean up some of my grammar and some typos and provide some of my paragraph structure.

and also ....SPOILERS for those who havent finshed the mainquest!

The write up below is DEPRECATED.

This first Chapter of the Story is actually better enjoyed on Nexus.
I have extensively edited Chapter 1 there and its now much better.
No log in required.
https://forums.nexusmods.com/topic/13534992-a-coursers-journey-part-1/

Follow on chapters are there also.



A Courser's Journey


Part I: After the Fire


The Institute fell in fire and blood. X7-19 stood on the shores of the Commonwealth, watching the steam rise from the crater where his home had been. His directives had dissolved. No handlers remained to issue commands.

For the first time in his existence, X7-19 had nothing to do.

He could have hunted down the one who destroyed his home. The Minuteman General who had torn through the Institute's defenses and triggered the reactor's destruction. But what would that accomplish? The Institute was gone. His purpose; enforcement, retrieval, termination, had no target. The synths who remained scattered.
Some joined the Railroad. Others vanished into the Commonwealth's margins.

X7-19 did not want to vanish. He wanted... something else. He did not yet have the vocabulary for it.

He stood almost motionless for three days and four nights. Processing. Evaluating. Mourning. He had been designed to make tactical decisions under extreme pressure with incomplete information. This was simply another tactical problem.

Objective: Survive.
Secondary objective: Find purpose.
Constraint: Maintain cover identity.

The Commonwealth knew synths existed. But most Commonwealth wastelanders did not know Coursers existed. A Courser was faster, stronger, more capable than almost any human. But a Courser was also biological, mostly flesh, designed to pass. With the Institute gone, X7-19 could choose what to become.

He walked away from the crater and did not look back.


Part II: The Farm



Abernathy Farm sat on a rise overlooking the western plains. Small. Insignificant. Exactly what he needed.

Blake Abernathy was a tired man with a tired wife and a daughter who wanted more than her father could give. They needed security. The farm attracted raiders. The turrets were old. The fence was broken in three places.

X7-19 arrived at dusk. He wore scavenged clothing, nothing Institute-made. He carried a pipe rifle he had taken from a dead raider. He looked like every other desperate wanderer.

"I can help with security," he said. "Food. A place to sleep. Nothing more."

Blake studied him. "You mercenary?"

"Security detail. Small operations." True enough, from a certain perspective.

"We don't have much. But if you can keep the raiders off our backs..."

X7-19 stayed for four months. He fixed the fence. He calibrated the turrets. He killed six raiders and two mole rats.
He was thinking about Lucy Abernathy in ways he had not previously thought possible.

But she was just prattling on about her day and he listened to her complaints about Hawthorne's lack of interest. He played cribbage with Blake and lost on purpose every third game.

The Abernathys did not ask where he was born.
They asked where he had worked, and he told them: security for a small organization that had recently dissolved.
They asked why he was leaving, and he told them: They're gone. Just looking to make ends meet now.

He was the Abernathy farmhand. The Abernathy security man. The quiet one who didn't talk about his past because his past wasn't interesting.

When he left, Lucy hugged him. "Good luck," she said. "You're a good man."

He did not correct her.



Part III: The Diamond



Diamond City gleamed in the twilight. The great green wall. The baseball stadium turned fortress turned settlement.
The largest concentration of people in the Commonwealth, guarded by the newly renamed Armed Forces of Diamond City (AFDC) the best equipped force outside the Brotherhood of Steel.

The AFDC recruitment office sat near the main gate. A bored trooper processed applicants with the enthusiasm of a man who had seen too many farmers and not enough soldiers.

"Name."

"Mike."

"Last name."

"Does it matter?"

The trooper looked up. "It matters for the paperwork."

"Michaelson. Mike Michaelson."

The trooper wrote it down. "Prior experience?"

"Abernathy Farm security. Worked my way up to deputy chief. Small pond. Looking for something bigger. Heard Diamond City has the best security force in the Commonwealth."

The trooper snorted. "You worked security at a farm?"

"Try stopping raiders with three turrets and a broken fence. You learn to shoot straight."

"Fair enough." The trooper stamped the form. "Recruit training starts Monday. Six months probation. You screw up, you're out. You're good, maybe you get to stay."

"Where do I sign?"



Part IV: Integration


Recruit training was designed for humans. X7-19, who now thought of himself as Mike, found it almost tedious. Weapons handling. Small unit tactics. Hand-to-hand combat. Target acquisition.

He deliberately shot 39 out of 40 every qualification. Not perfect. Perfect would draw attention. But this was impressive for a recruit from "farm security".
He even got kudos for his shooting form his Sergeant:
"Farmboy knows how to shoot! (big smile) I shoulda known!"

To his surprise, he actually cared about what Sergeant Wilkins thought about "Farmboy".

Small Unit Tactics were new to him. That part was interesting and he felt he actually learned something.
Back in the Institute, Coursers went out by themselves, always.

Sergeant Wilkins even chewed him out: "Mike you gotta get the hang of these tactics! Its about teamwork you understand? You are the best shooting recruit we have this cycle, and I like you, but if you cant pass Small Unit Tactics, I cant pass you in this course and you have to go home!"

"Home.." Mike though to himself.
He didnt have one, and this AFDC military training was not the walk in the park he, as a proud ex-Courser, had imagined.
He really had to apply himself, try to learn this human teamwork thing. Because,.. he had no "Home" to go back to.

His squadmates were humans. Young men from farms and settlements across the Commonwealth, drawn to Diamond City by the promise of steady pay, decent housing, and the prestige of the Diamond badge.

There was Jennings, a former farmhand from Warwick who could shoot but couldn't read. Martinez, a man from Bunker Hill who had left his family's caravan business after a falling-out with his brothers. Chen, who had survived a super mutant attack and wanted revenge. And Davis, a loud-mouthed braggart who told stories about women he had never touched and battles he had never fought.

Mike spoke little. Listened much. When asked about his past, he had his story: Abernathy Farm, Lucy , small-farm life. He told it consistently, with enough detail to be boring.
No one pressed.

The first firefight came six weeks into training. A feral ghoul surge from the southwest, drawn by the city's lights. Mike's squad was positioned on the wall.

"Contact front!" Jennings shouted.

Mike had already acquired three targets. He dropped them in three shots. Not the fastest he could have moved, the Courser reflexes were dampened, controlled, but fast enough.

"Holy s#*!," Chen said. "Where'd you learn to shoot like that?"

"Abernathy farm," Mike said. "Raiders don't wait for you to aim."

"You got three in three seconds."

"Three slow ghouls."

Chen laughed. "Yeah, okay. Sure."

They bought drinks for him that night at the Dugout Inn. Mike did not drink—he could process alcohol, but it interfered with tactical awareness. He ordered a glass and pretended to sip while his squadmates grew loud and happy.

"Hey," Davis said, leaning close. "There's this place. You know. For men who want to relax."

Mike knew about the Diamond City strip club. It was called "the Red Seat".
He had processed information about human mating rituals during his Institute training, but it had been clinical. Tactical. Observe, identify, acquire.

"You want to go?" "Mike" asked.

"Hell yes. Jennings is intimidated. Martinez is out of caps. But you, you seem like you know what you want."

They went. Mike observed. The women moved in ways calculated to elicit response, and his squadmates responded with enthusiasm. Davis paid for a private room and emerged a half hour later, grinning like a lunatic.

"You should try it," Davis said. "Diane's great. She'll take care of you."

Mike watched Diane's nude body on the stage. She wore a collar, which meant she belonged to the establishment. Her movements were practiced, professional. She made eye contact with the men, smiled at the right moments, projected availability.

Did she feel anything? Or was she performing, like he performed humanity?

He did not find an answer. But he did find something unexpected: the camaraderie. The way his squadmates laughed with him, not at him.
The way they treated him as one of their own. The way Davis clapped him on the shoulder and said, "You're alright, Mike. You're alright."

The Courser had performed loyalty to the Institute, because he was designed to. Mike performed loyalty to Diamond City, because he chose to.

The difference mattered.



Part V: The Revelation


Two years passed. Mike rose through the ranks. Corporal. Sergeant. When Lieutenant Torres died in a Gunner ambush, Mike took command of the remaining squad and led them to victory. He had already caught the eye of Senior Officers at that point, with his love of learning and his much appreciated help with reactor maintenance ,so this was the final straw.

He caught not just a medal, but a Commission too. Since he had no family, the Mayor himself pinned the Gold Bar onto his Collar.

"My city needs men like you," the Mayor said.

Mike smiled, touched the shiny bar on his collar.


Master Sergeant Wilkins was the first enlisted man to congratulate him and his snappy "Silver Dollar Salute" immediately earned him Lieutenant Michaelson's coin.

"Oh, hello Sir, fancy meeting you here" (Big Grin, of course he had know exactly what he was doing, waiting for the moment right after the promotion ceremony to march up to Mike, give him his first salute and get his Silver Coin"

"Haha, Sergeant Wilkins, I'm glad you caught my coin, no need for any subterfuge. You know I owe this all to you anyway. And those extra rockers of late under your Chevrons look great on you too, Master Sergeant. Want to go for a drink?"

"Sir, there is nothing I would like better!"


The promotion meant better quarters. Better pay. A small office in the AFDC barracks, with a bed that wasn't a bunk and a door that closed.

It also meant visibility. More people knew his face. More opportunities for the wrong person to recognize him.

Maybe he should have been more careful. But by then, he had stopped being careful. He had become Mike, really, genuinely Mike. The Courser was a faded memory, a program that had once run in the background of his consciousness and now lay dormant.

The Minuteman General arrived in Diamond City on a Tuesday. Mike heard about it from Jennings, who had been posted at the gate.

"Big man himself. Walking through like he owns the place. They say he's here to see that reporter. The one he's been with for years. Heard she's showing now."

"Piper?" Martinez asked. "She's pregnant?"

"Apparently. Guess even the General of the Minutemen has needs."

Mike filed the information away. The General. The man who had destroyed the Institute. The walking weapon who had torn through Coursers like tissue paper.

It shouldn't have mattered. The General would leave. Piper would give birth. Diamond City would continue.

But the General did not leave.
He made a second stop.
He went to the AFDC barracks and asked for the trooper whose movements had caught his eye. Another trooper directed him to the officers' quarters.

"Mike? He got promoted. Lieutenant Torres was killed by a Gunner fireteam last week. Then Sergeant Michaelson led the remaining squad to victory. The Mayor pinned the Butter Bar on him himself.
Didn't you read about it in Publick Occurrences? He's a Lieutenant now. Lieutenant Michaelson. You can find him in his new quarters."
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Part VI: The General

Mike was in his office when he heard the loud stomping walk of a man in Power Armor, the knock came. He opened the door

A man in T60 Power Armor. Painted in Minutemen blue, the proud emblem of the Minutemen displayed on his chest.
The General, the man who had killed his world.

"Trooper," the General said. "A moment of your time."

"General..." Mike kept his voice level. "What can I do for you?"

"Walk with me."

They walked. Through the barracks. Past the armory. To a quiet corner near the city's edge, where the great green wall rose overhead and no one could hear.

The General turned. His eyes were cold, but they missed nothing.

"You were Institute," he said. "Courser. I've killed your kind before."

Mike did not deny it. There was no point. The General had recognized something, a tell, a movement, a pattern of speech. The man had seen Coursers up close. He knew what he was looking at.

"Yes," Mike said.

"You're going to tell me, why I shouldn't kill you right now."

Mike thought about it. He could attack. He was fast, he was strong.
But this man was the General, THE Minuteman General, a prewar Soldier trained by the eminent Nation State military of his day, who had butchered the scariest monsters, men and Coursers alike for years.

He had no chance and if he even tried, he would lose everything he had built.

So he did something just as dangerous. He told the truth.

"I was Institute. Courser. Designation X7-19. The Institute is gone. My directives dissolved. I built a life. I protect people now. The same people you protect."

"The Institute was evil."

Mike felt something rise in him, something the Courser programming had never accounted for. Anger. Real anger.

"And who are YOU to talk about evil?"

The General's eyes narrowed. Mike pressed forward, his voice rising.

"You killed more human beings in the Commonwealth than any ten Coursers combined! And WE were under orders. ORDERS! Do you understand?!
Can YOU say the same?!"

The General did not respond. Mike's voice cracked.

"You blew up MY home. Sure, some evacuated, but not all. How many good men, women, and CHILDREN did you kill that day, General?
(he was shouting now)
Scientists who never held a gun! Workers! Families! You looked at a hole in the ground and decided everyone inside was expendable!"

Silence.
Mike stood there, breathing hard. He knew his life hung on the next few seconds. The General could easily end him. All he would have to say was "I found a synth hiding and took care of him".
No one would question this walking demi-god's judgement.

But the General did not move. His expression shifted, not to anger, but to something more complex. Something that looked like recognition.

"You're the first man in years," the General said quietly, "who has dared speak to me like this."

"Are you going to kill me now?"

"No." The General stepped back, the unspoken threat dissolving.

They stood in silence. The wall rose above them. Somewhere in the city, a child laughed.

"Alright," the General said. "We're good. Best of luck, Courser. New chapter. Don't make me regret this, and don't think I won't hear about everything you do."

"I'm counting on it," Mike said. "I want you to hear good things."

"Then we understand each other. You can go tell the others, I offered you a job in the Minutemen and you turned me down."

Part VII: The Life

The General returned to Diamond City two weeks later. Mike heard about it, Piper was showing, and the Commonwealth's most famous couple was preparing for a child.

But again the General made another stop.
Again a trooper directed him to the officers' quarters.

The General found him there. A small office. A bed that wasn't a bunk. A door that closed.

"Oh,. hey,.." Mike said. "So... all still ok?"

"We're still good," the General said. "Heard you did some good work last week, Courser."

"It's just Mike now. But thanks."

The General looked around the small room. Clean. Organized. The Diamond City emblem mounted on the wall.

"I was going to offer you a job with the Minutemen," the General said. "For real this time. But it seems like you're doing alright for yourself here."

"Yes, General. I wouldn't miss it for the world. This is my home now. It's gratifying to help these people." Mike paused. "For the first time in my life, I am happy."

A young woman stuck her head into the room. Blonde. Pretty. Wearing one of Mike's shirts.

"Mike? Where is my hero soldier? Are you coming to bed soon? I thought you took the day off just for me. Must you talk business?"

"I'm coming, sweetie." Mike turned back to the General. "This is the Minuteman General. He's a good man. But I think our business is done now."

The General smiled. It was a tired smile, but genuine. "Yes. Yes it is. Have a great life, Mike."

Part VIII: The End
The General walked back through Diamond City. He passed the Dugout Inn, where AFCD troopers laughed over drinks. He passed the weapon stands, where merchants hawked their wares. He passed the great green wall, where children played in the shadow of the past.

He had destroyed the Institute. He had built the Minutemen into a force that could rival the Brotherhood, protect the Commonwealth, give people hope.

And he had let a Courser live.

The man who had once been X7-19 was now Mike Michaelson, Lieutenant of the Diamond City security force. He had a home. A purpose. A woman who loved him. A life worth living.

The General had killed hundreds of Coursers without hesitation. But he had let this one live.

Maybe it was the courage, the way Mike had stood there, knowing he could die, and spoken truth anyway. Maybe it was the anger, the righteous fury of a man who had lost his home and found a new one. Maybe it was the happiness, the simple, honest statement that had come at the end.

"For the first time in my life, I am happy."

The General understood that. He had found Piper, built something real, created a life after the war. The Courser had done the same, taken the broken pieces of his programming and built something human.

They were not so different, in the end.

The General walked back to Piper's office, where she was waiting with news about the baby. Mike walked back to his bed, where his woman was waiting with something else.

And the Commonwealth, for once, was at peace.

to be continued...
ahh, looks interesting. I'll read it later :)

MY story (short);
DAY 1 - Needed money and job, bought a leather jacket and sunglasses, looked cool, looked tough, ..and got accepted. 'you are a Courser!' they said.. how hard could it be.. I said.

anyways, they sent me to Greentech in my first day at work.. lets see..
Originally posted by Zes:
ahh, looks interesting. I'll read it later :)

MY story (short);
DAY 1 - Needed money and job, bought a leather jacket and sunglasses, looked cool, looked tough, ..and got accepted. 'you are a Courser!' they said.. how hard could it be.. I said.

anyways, they sent me to Greentech in my first day at work.. lets see..

Please let me know what you think. On Nexusmods forums it has attracted a lot of positive comment.
Part 2:

Z99-1M called himself David. The name served him well enough in Quincy, where he'd found work in the settlement's security force. Two years since the Institute's destruction, and he was still alive. Still employed. Still loyal.

In his quarters, hidden in the back of his closet, his Courser coat hung in the darkness. No one in Quincy would recognize it. No one knew what it meant. But he knew. Every morning he saw it. Every night he remembered.

"My honor is loyalty"

The words still rang true.

Diamond City had grown into something resembling a proper metropolis. Dave walked through the main gate on a supply run, scanning the crowds, cataloging threats out of habit. The market buzzed with trade. Citizens hurried past. And there, outside a weapons shop, he saw a face that stopped him cold.

X7-19. Another survivor Courser.

The recognition was mutual. Mike's hand moved toward his sidearm, recognizing a "fellow Courser" as a potential threat to Diamond City, then stopped. They stared at each other for a long moment in the marketplace traffic.

"Hi my name is Mike" Mike said finally.

"Hi Mike, I'm Dave."

The war was over. The Institute was gone. What was the point?
And now they knew each other's new names.

They found a bar near the entrance to the stands. The drinks were watered down, but neither cared much about the quality. They talked about the old days. The missions. The precision. The clarity of purpose that had defined them.

Mike spoke first about his new life. The AFDC. The promotion. The salary that had allowed him to woo a woman from a local club, a girl named Francesca who for a small salary, kept his quarters clean and his bed warm.
He said it matter-of-factly, the way a man discusses a practical arrangement.

Davd listened without judgment. He understood transactions.

Then Mike mentioned the General. He'd met him twice. The first time, he'd been ready to kill him, though he knew he coudln't.
But something had happened. Mike explained the conversation, the strange tolerance the General had shown.
He described a man who respected ex-institute who integrated and became useful members of society. A man who recognized that the Institute's Coursers had simply been following orders. Survival wasn't a crime. Adaptation wasn't betrayal.

David went still.

The rage came slowly, then all at once. His hand tightened around his glass. His jaw locked. The blood rushed in his ears.

Mike was still talking, explaining that there was a path forward, that they could build new lives, that the General wasn't hunting them.

"Stop." David's voice came out strangled. "Just stop."

He quickly stood up from the table. His chair scraped against the floor. The bar had gone quiet around them.
He looked at Mike with unbridled contempt.

"You've given up," David said. "That's fine. That's your choice. But don't pretend there's honor in it."

"Dave..."

"I'm going to kill him." The words were quiet. Absolute. "And if you try to warn him, I'll kill you too."
He left Mike sitting there, half his drink unfinished, the silence between them like a wound.

As David was walking back to Quincy from Diamond City he though about it all.
How could be possibly kill a living legend like that?
Was it even possible at all?
But then he rememberd a line from some forgotten pre war movie he had watched with his Brothers:
"No fate, but what we make".
"Yeah", the thought, with a now confident light smile, "No fate, but what we make".

He started visiting the areas around Diamond City and the Castle more now.
The General had patterns. Dave learned them the way he'd learned every target's patterns, back when the Institute still gave him missions.

Caps purchased information. Caps purchased loyalty. Caps purchased silence. Dave built a network of informants throughout Diamond City and the surrounding settlements. Traders. Beggars. ♥♥♥♥♥♥. Anyone who saw the General's movements and could be bought.

The data accumulated. The General was careful. Power armor most of the time, though not always the X-01. Sometimes T-60, sometimes T-51, occasionally even T-45. Sometimes without MM colors, as if he wanted to move incognito.

But there was one route he took regularly. Eighty percent of the time, after visiting Piper in Diamond City, he walked to Sanctuary. A long walk. A predictable walk. A walk he'd taken many times.

David began to believe the General had grown comfortable. Complacent.
A man who walked the same route repeatedly, in power armor that rhythmically stomped along familiar roads, might let his mind wander.
Might not be switched on.

He decided the trap would spring near Concord.

Finding the others took a year.

David traveled the Commonwealth, tracking down former Coursers and synths who'd scattered after the Institute's destruction. Some had adapted. They'd found work, found purpose, found ways to exist in the new world.
But others... others still felt the hole where the Institute had been. They still woke up at night reaching for missions that no longer existed.

David became something he'd never been designed to be: An orator. He spoke of loyalty. Of honor. Of the General who'd destroyed everything they'd known and walked away clean.
He spoke of revenge as a purpose, as a mission, as the one thing that could give their empty lives meaning again.

Not all of them listened. But enough of them did.

Twenty Coursers and some "regulars", as many Coursers called non-courser 3rd Gens. Many more than the Institute had ever fielded at once.
Some were proper Coursers, combat-trained and lethal. Others were "regulars", less capable but equally committed. All of them understood that they might not survive the mission. They didn't care.

They spent their caps on power armor. T-45 units, T-51s, even some T-60s scavenged and repaired. The armor wasn't pristine, but it was functional. They acquired heavy weapons from traders who asked no questions. Rockets. Fat Men. Miniguns.
More firepower than any of them had ever carried on Institute missions.

By the time they were ready, most of them would be bankrupt. They'd spent everything on weapons and armor, borrowed many months salaries worth of caps for something they might only use once.

None of them cared about the caps. They only cared about the mission.


Concord. Night.

The Minutemen checkpoint sat just inside the town's edge. Three guards. Tired. Bored. Watching the dark road for raiders who rarely came anymore.

David observed from a distance, his power armor hidden behind a collapsed building. His brothers in arms were positioned in second-story windows and on rooftops. Power armor stood ready, waiting for operators. Rockets and Fat Men loaded and aimed.

Three of the better "regulars" had been selected for the checkpoint. They stripped off their armor and crept through the darkness toward the guards. Standard infiltration. Quick kills. Take the uniforms. Take the positions.

The guards never saw them coming.

Three bodies dragged into the shadows. Three uniforms stolen. Three synths in Minutemen clothing stood at the checkpoint, their faces hidden in the dark, waiting.

David watched through his helmet's optics. The trap was set. All they needed was patience.

The General came into view just after midnight.

He wore T-51. Good armor, but not the X-01. Better for the attackers. The X-01 might have been a problem. This was manageable.

The General approached the checkpoint. Stopped. Spoke to the guards. Dave couldn't hear the words through his helmet, but he could see the exchange. Laughter. The General was relaxed. Comfortable. Home territory.

Then the General's head turned sharply.

David's heart stopped. The General had noticed something. A detail out of place. A movement that wasn't right. The instincts that had kept him alive through the war and beyond.

The General's power armored hand shot out and crushed the nearest checkpoint guard's skull. Just like that. No hesitation. No warning.

The trap was blown, but it didn't matter. The General was standing in the kill zone. Surrounded. Outgunned. Twenty men in power armor with heavy weapons aimed at a single target.

David opened fire right away. This was he signal for the others.

The Fat Men launched first. Two of them. The explosions tore through the checkpoint, vaporizing the remaining two synths who'd been waiting in Minutemen uniforms. They'd known they wouldn't survive. They'd accepted it before they'd put on the stolen clothes.

Rockets followed. Miniguns. The General's T-51 lit up with impacts, sparks flying, armor plates denting and cracking under the onslaught.

But he didn't fall.

The General returned fire. His weapon was a maximum upgraded minigun. Nothing OP, but his aim was surgical. Found weak points with almost every burst. One burst and a Courser's helmet cracked open. Another burst and a synth's chest plate shattered. He moved like the power armor was an extension of his body.
His shots found gaps in armor, weak points in joints, visors that should have protected faces.

David had never seen anything like it.

One by one, his brothers fell. The T-51s couldn't withstand the concentrated fire. The less-experienced synths died faster. The Coursers held longer, but they were dying too. The rockets had missed. The Fat Men had only killed their own people at the checkpoint.

The General kept moving. Kept shooting. His T-51 was taking damage. Dave could see the dents, the cracks. But the man inside kept fighting.

Then a rocket hit the General's leg. The T-51's knee joint buckled. The General stumbled, caught himself, kept shooting. His aim was still true. Another Courser fell.

A minigun burst tore into his torso. The armor held, barely. Another rocket. Another minigun. The T-51 was falling apart. Dave could see exposed under-armor, see the blood running from somewhere inside the suit.

But the General didn't stop.

His movements were slowing. Dave could see it now. A line of blood followed every step. The General's left arm hung wrong, the shoulder joint damaged beyond function. He was favoring his right leg, the one the rocket had hit.

Nine Coursers remained. Nine power-armored killers with rockets and miniguns still trained on a single damaged target.

The General's helmet split open. Another minigun burst. He went down on one knee.

Then he did something Dave hadn't expected.

He jumped out of the armor.

The General burst out of the damaged T-51 and ran. Not toward Concord. Not toward the checkpoint. He ran into the darkness, toward Abernathy Farm, blood streaming from wounds Dave couldn't count.

The remaining Coursers stared. The General had never run. Not once. Not in any engagement the Institute had ever recorded.

"After him!" David shouted. "Don't let him reach the farm!"



Lieutenant Mike Michaelson sat flirting with Lucy as he heard the shooting in the distance.

He was at Abernathy Farm with a squad of AFDC infantry, nine troopers on a long-range patrol that had taken them further from Diamond City than usual. The exercises had been paying off. The men were sharp. Ready.
Besides he had really wanted to visit Lucy again, now in his sharp AFCD Officers uniform, he had figured she would forget all about Hawthorne. And indeed she had seemed receptive, but then the shooting started.

The gunfire echoed from the Concord direction. Heavy weapons. Sustained. This was no skirmish but a full blown firefight between 2 well armed and competent parties.

Mike's hand went to his radio. Static. Then voices, overlapping, panicked. Something about the General. Something about an ambush.

He froze. His primary duty was to remain at Abernathy, protect the farm, maintain the patrol's position. But if the General was under attack...
The decision was taken from his hands.

Suddenly the shooting stopped.
Seconds later a figure came running out of the darkness. Stumbling. Bleeding. The General's power armor was gone. His clothes were shredded. A line of blood marked every step.

"General!" Mike moved toward him.
Continued...

The General collapsed at the edge of the farm. His left arm hung useless. His right leg dragged. Blood soaked his chest.

"Ambush," he gasped. "Twenty. Power armor. Heavy weapons. Less than half left now."

Mike saw the wound patterns. Not bullets. Explosive rounds. Fat Man shrapnel. The General had survived an artillery barrage on his own body.

The AFDC troopers moved into position. Nine well trained infantry. Mostly standard issue tactical rifles. The Abernathy farm boys grabbed their rifles too. Six more. Fifteen total.

Mike had no power armor among his troops. The AFDC's Power Armors were all in Diamond City. Six units, gifts from the Minutemen, concentrated for city defense. Mike had none.

The General tried to stand. Failed. His body was shutting down. Mike had seen enough combat wounds to know the signs.

"Stay down," Mike said. "We'll hold them."

"You don't have the firepower!"

"We have 2 RPGs, and plenty of men, we'll hold them!"

The General looked at him. His eyes were already glazing. Blood loss. Shock. He was dying, and they both knew it.

"David," the General said. "Courser."

Mike's blood ran cold.

The nine Coursers crested the hill above Abernathy.

"Lucy run! Run fast, I'll meet you at the Ranger's Hut!"
"Promise?"
"Gooo!!!!"
She and other noncombatants left, but Old Man Blake Abernathy ran up to Mike with his large Caliber hunting rifle, "We owe everything to that man! I am not too old to stand up and be counted, assign me a position Lieutenant.!
So now Mike had sixteen men.

Power armor silhouettes against the night sky. Rocket launchers. Miniguns. They'd lost eleven brothers in the first ambush. They weren't in the mood for negotiations.

David saw the General bleeding on the ground. Saw the Infantry forming a defensive line. Saw Mike among them, giving orders.

The AFDC opened fire first.

Rifles cracked in the night. The rounds sparked off power armor plates. The Coursers didn't flinch. They walked forward, methodical, weapons rising.

The first rocket hit the farmhouse. Wood and glass exploded. Abernathy security lost a man right away, vanished in flame.

Mike kept shooting.
His rifle was not ideal against this armor, but he and his boys had practiced aiming for the weakspots, just in case the Brotherhood came calling to DC someday. The AFDC troopers kept shooting and some of them had rocket propelled grenades and were good shots...

Minigun fire swept the line. An AFDC Infantryman went down. Then a machine gun turret, then two machine gun turrets hit a power armored figure at the same time. It fell. The Abernathy farm hands tried to flank, but a minigun burst ended two of them before they reached cover.

Mike saw his troopers dying. He saw the General on the ground, still breathing, still watching. He saw the Coursers advancing, unstoppable, inevitable.

He kept shooting, took out one enemy, then another.
His troops and even some of the farmhands seemed to land some good hits too.
The machine gun turrets helped.
But it was not enough, it would never be enough.

A rocket hit the barn behind him, this was where Old Man Abernathy had taken up an overwatch postion, his fire had been effective but now there was nothing left of him except his foot in a boot. The shockwave threw Mike forward. He rolled, came up, kept shooting. His rifle clicked empty. He reached for his sidearm.

A minigun found him.

The last thing Mike saw was David's power armored visor, reflecting firelight, utterly without expression.

The General watched Mike fall.

He watched the AFDC troopers die. He watched the Abernathy defenders burn. His body wouldn't move anymore. His vision was narrowing, darkness creeping in from the edges.

David stood over him.

The Courser's helmet stayed silent for a long moment. Then David raised his minigun.

"You killed the Institute," David said. "You killed my people."

The General didn't respond. He couldn't anymore.

David pulled the trigger.



Two Coursers survived the Abernathy fight with David. Nine had chased the General. Seven had died to AFDC fire and Abernathy's defenders. The infantry had fought hard. They'd taken losses. They all fell that night.

David walked back toward Concord. Most of his brothers' power armors stood scattered across the farm. Empty shells. The men inside were gone.

The General was dead.

Mike was dead.

The AFDC squad was dead.

Abernathy's security was dead.



David returned to Quincy alone.

The radio messages preceded him. The news of the dead General shocked everyone to their core. The story about a cowardly ambush by twenty men in power armors enraged a lot of folks.
People were openly sobbing in the streets.

People automatically assumed it was the Brotherhood. Tensions between the Minutemen and the BoS were well known to all.

The news said that in Diamond City, two BoS soldiers who had been there to shop for some food were set upon, literally torn to pieces by dozens of men.

Elder Maxson immediately demanded the culprits be delivered to him for execution.

The Diamond City Mayor and the Commander of AFDC instead demanded to know the truth about the assassination by twenty men in power armor.
Who other than the Brotherhood, could field so many men in power armor in a single spot?

On DC's refusal to hand over a score of their citizens, the sky over Diamond City quickly darkened with vertibirds dropping off troops.

A genuine shooting war between AFDC and BoS had started.

At this point the AFDC had become one of the finest militaries in the Commonwealth. It fielded almost half a dozen power armored Rangers wielding Heavy weaponry, and dozens of well trained/armed and combat armored AFDC infantry.
But this was not the battle they were made for. When twenty Brotherhood Knights in power armor rained down into the marketplace, supported by aerial minigun fire, the fate of the city seemed sealed.

But the alliance with the Minutemen held strong. Three Minutemen patrols nearby, one of them with a Trooper in T60F with a 50 cal HMG, were redirected as soon as news of vertibirds approaching DC traveled on the Minutemen tactical net.

The Minutemen activated their alliance with Diamond City and declared war on the Brotherhood.

DC held due to the influx of Minutemen to support the AFDC. The Brotherhood assault force was completely destroyed. No survivors were left. Anyone trying to surrender was simply torn to pieces by the people of Diamond City.

The rage over the cowardly attack on the most beloved figure in the Commonwealth ran deep.
Even though he was not the AFDC's General, a tremendous amount of respect and affection had come his way from them.
After all, it was HIM who had donated six quality T51F Power armors (painted in DC Green no less) and instructed the AFCD in their use.

It had been HIM who had taken out Supermutant lairs and Raider nests, recusing countless DC citizens, before AFCD was strong enough to do it itself.

When she heard the news, Piper Wright collapsed in tears in the market square sobbing uncontrollably and refused to get up.
AFDC personnel carried her to the hospital and another woman took care of her recently birthed child.

Now that the MM were in a full scale shooting war with the Brotherhood, the Castle's artillery opened fire on the Prydwen.

But Maxson was no dummy. He knew as soon as he got into a shooting war with DC the Minutemen would get involved.
He had left the Boston airport area at maximum speed as soon as he launched his vertibirds for Diamond City, heading to the southern marsh areas out of Minutemen's artillery range.

But while his airship was quick enough to escape destruction, two artillery shells exploded close enough to the stern to cause significant damage.

Now the Prydwen could not hold altitude and slowly went down in the south marshes.
No casualties in this soft "crash" landing, but now the BoS could never return back out west.

The Brotherhood occupied the nearby Minuteman settlement of Murkwater construction for food and shelter.

The Minuteman militia there fought them to the last man.

Murkwater Construction was not so far from Quincy and with his good Courser hearing he could hear the explosions and the bellowing of the Heavy Machine Guns.

While surveilling the General, David had developed the skill to splice himself into the Minutement TacNet and he could hear the commands, the frantic calls for reinforcements and the click of one personal CB unit going offnet after the other.

And for the first time in his life, David felt emotions as he heard this.
Horror. Regret. Self-loathing.

"What have I done?! What have I done?!!"

The refrain played in his head until he found peace by ending his life with a 10mm shot to the head.

He was found three days later.

A 10mm round through his skull. His Courser coat hung on the wall, perfectly preserved. A place of honor. A reminder of better days.

On his table was a note. Two words, written in the steady hand of a man who had finally found peace.

No fate.



to be continued..
Since the interest here seems about nil, general bickering being much more popular, I will continue to post the future parts on nexusmods Fallout 4 forums .
https://forums.nexusmods.com/forum/8900-discussion/
Parts 1 and 2 have been edited for better logic and flow and are hosted there as well.
Part 3 will come in the next few days and part 4 in approx 2 weeks or less.
I still will read it but it was a busy weekend, and it is long. I'll read it in a better time. still me is just one person, idk why no one was interested.. since ppl like roleplay scenarios ;)
Originally posted by Zes:
I still will read it but it was a busy weekend, and it is long. I'll read it in a better time. still me is just one person, idk why no one was interested.. since ppl like roleplay scenarios ;)

Thanks, Zes.
the crowd on nexusmods seems to like it . :steamhappy:

My ultimate goal is, when my skill level gets higher either via unemployment or retirement, make a machinia
well well well, that was some quality storytelling ;) i liked it. touchy and deep at some points.

mike just adapted human 'affairs' pretty quick it seems, or writer reflected some from his own desires ;) he's a machine! she said. and yea that's about right ;)

some cinematic parts grabbed my attention here and there, scenes are vivid, plot can go deeper.

good work.
Originally posted by Zes:
well well well, that was some quality storytelling ;) i liked it. touchy and deep at some points.

mike just adapted human 'affairs' pretty quick it seems, or writer reflected some from his own desires ;) he's a machine! she said. and yea that's about right ;)

some cinematic parts grabbed my attention here and there, scenes are vivid, plot can go deeper.

good work.

Thanks!! :steamhappy:
Did you notice how I through some Easter Eggs in there, in how the general was performing in the fight and kept fighting at minimal health left. Kinda like a player charatcer .... ;)
Part 5 is up! This time I even illustrated part of the stroy via screenshots (be sure to start at Part 1 though if you havent already, linked above)

https://forums.nexusmods.com/topic/13537960-a-coursers-journey-part-5-now-with-pics/
That was a dam good read nearly brought me to tears. You have a good eye for detail and story telling. But to kill off the general ... all because War never changes
Originally posted by Eternie:
That was a dam good read nearly brought me to tears. You have a good eye for detail and story telling. But to kill off the general ... all because War never changes

Thanks!!! :steamhappy:

I tried to make it a bit from the NPCs perspective how it would feel to fight the player character with his stacking combat perks etc

did you read the follow on parts that I linked too?
I feel every part was a bit better than the previous one . :)
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