CRITIQUE....please ♥

see my tummy gettin thinner
see my arms real thin
wanna feel your bones on my bones
wanna feel you movin in
you can see my hipbones baby
ribs and backbones, sternum too
you can see all my bones baby
but theres more to show to you

can you see the cuts on my wrist?
see the burns on my hand?
see the pain in my eyes?
save me from whats within
heal all my wounds tonight love
dont leave me home alone
or ill start a new collection
of my red ruby stones

can you hear her as she whispers
ana's up to it again
she yells at me all day long
and at night there is no end
she tells me when ive had too much
which is just one bite of bread
she always makes me suffer
please get out of my head

you can save me from my sicknes
from my cuts and broken soul
you can sew my heart up baby
once again i can be whole

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crimson tears
leaking from my self-inflicted wounds
when will my wounds heal?
when will i be fixed?
for now i am broken
broken and crying
my dark crimson tears

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sitting in the dark
the dark deep pit of my depression
waiting for the end
waiting for someone to save me
but for now i will sit and cry from my wounds
for it is the only thing left i know how to do right