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Its all in your head










Suffocate me with your wishes,
burn me with your pride.
Love me with your wicked,
curse me with your eyes.

Shush,
can you hear them?
thud, thud, thudding from across the room?

  They're
         coming
                    for
                        me.

I swear through closed fists and breath through patched lungs.

The metal feels cold against my skin.
Temptation is calling,
can you hear them?
scream, scream, screaming from across the room?

They're
       getting
               closer.


I think im getting scared.

Strength in electricity

After the love I had worked for died and I had found that I loved you my sexy man. But I try so hard for you to see that i love you and yet you push me aside. i can't talk to you and yet your the lonely one leaving. Do you believe in free love? What am I supposed to do with you? Sit and wait for you? And when I look into you I feel that your not strong enough for my love. I don't know if you'll break or save me but I'm here waiting for your thoughts that I've been saving. I want to come first I won't settle for less, give me first. Don't want to be like every other one that came before me. DOn't you know that you make me suffer when I'm around you. Your love makes me suffer, do you hear me moan when you look at me your eyes are beautiful upon my body but I want you. I'm a woman who needs your flesh pressed upon my curves and inside of my longing. When I'm around you my heart is set on fire, I want to lay beside you. Keep on watching, I want you, your love sets me on fire, I feel the burning as I see you driving and when you touch me I feel as if I'm dying of an electric pulse. I'm not gonna go home alone for long, as beautiful as women are I see you, not your body, your soul has cught my delicate grey wings in your fire. Your body is just as close as I can be around your soul. It pains me when you go home alone. WIll we ever get this right? Both you and I always keep it bottled up inside, will you let me give myself to you? Theres no one who picks my broken heart up again like you. Whose going home with you tonight my love? Must we keep these secrets so far down below for so long? I wish you had the heart to let it show. Why can't I hold onto you my love? And I've been waiting for you for so long. And I see you, I can see right through you and you are my moment. Your a man and a beautiful man whom they just throw away but I want you as my own. How can the world want you to change as long as you know who you are you belong with me. I want to give to you, this is a chance I'm willing to take my sexy man. I go alone just because Im wishing to be with you. What songs should I sing to you? I'm going to let you know now, I'm in love with you, I'm so in love with you. Let me say one last thing to you if it be all I ever utter. Things are hard but with love and compassion with a soulmate they will be brighter. I envision a world that is much brighter and only when you see love as a beautiful tool will things get easier. Someday you will put it all together and figure out that pain is the weight that makes your stronger. Embrace life and enver reject love my dear. Reject all else but in all remember love.

introintrointro.

Well, hello there. My name is Alex. I'm 18 and a freshman in college. I'm really into music. I sing. Hopefully someday this will lead to a career, but because I am a realist I am majoring in psychology just in case that plan falls through.

Other than that I read and write a lot. Mostly poetry and short stories. I was working on a novel for a while, but my hard drive crashed and I lost 14 chapters. School has kept me super busy lately, but I've been trying to write more. Most of my poems are about romance, and the rest are a mixture of emo-ness and just writing about daily events. I started writing when I was very little. I think about first grade. Writing has always been my outlet. A lot of people in my family are writers, so it just sorta happened.

Found this community on one of those plug communities, among the sea of posts about clothes and jewelry for sale, RPGs, and fanfiction. Just seemed to catch my eye. Hopefully it will grow. I love meeting new people. =)

Oh, and I'm a vegetarian! Dunno why I felt like adding that.

;D

Since no one's posted yet....

 I guess I'll post something right now.

I'll start with my poem,  The Fire of Problems.

Millions of problems ignite in front of dispassionate eyes.
The flames of downfall burn brightly before the human race.
Billions of stares blankly misinterpret all that has gone wrong.
Some try to put out the flames, but without compassion, they are insurmountable.
All together we must smother the flames of suffering.
We must ban together, realizing the fire was our own creation.
Through hate,opression,and greed, we have ignited our hope to overcome.
Someday this fire must stop growing.
Someday, we shall put out the flsmes.
Someday all will be firefighters- working together to end the pain.
 

If anyone actually reads this, please critique :)


Ok, so I'm hoping that my introduction can sort of help as a guidline for people to post introductions. It doesn't have to be exactly like this, just as long as it gets across whatever you want to say.

My name is Nessa, and my Live Journal is nesserz193, and I'm the creator of this cool little community. I'm a sophomore in high school, and I love to write. I've written (and sang) 3 songs on YouTube, and I have a book with a bunch of poems I wrote. I'm kinda a shy person, but I'm really easy to talk to. Truth is, I'm probably more intimidated by you than you are by me.
My other interests include the Beatles and the Monkees. I'm absolutely OBSESSED!
I started writing poetry about... 6 years ago (man, I can't believe it's been that long!) when my dad died. Most of my poems are sorta based on that. So if you're not into sad poems, I'm sorry, that's how I write 'em most of the time.
And so, that's about it from me. I hope you enjoy this community!
Oh, and if you want, check out my videos! I'm only gonna post two, the third one is a tad embarassing I believe.....






^^ Ok, now let's analyze this to help to serve as a model for the future.
Basically your post should...
1. Introduce yourself. You don't have to use your real name, just use your username if you want.
2. Tell a little about yourself. your interests, your hobbies, etc. Whatever you feel comfortable sharing.
3. Tell about your writing, Maybe when you started, who started you in writing, what kind of writing you like to do, etc. This is a poetry community, but as long as you like to write, you're fine with me :).
4. Add anything else you want to say.
 AND it'd be super awesome if you could say how you found this community. That would totally help me out. :)

Just a little introduction....

Hi to whoever comes across this community,

In order to explain this community, I believe I should post exactly what I wrote in the "About" section of the User Info...

Here's the story. I love poetry, and in my search for a community to post my poetry in, they all seemed a little... intimidating. There were TONS of members, and I, being knew to livejournal, wasn't sure if I was supposed to just jump in and post, or say something about myself first.

So, I decided to create this community! Trust me, don't be intimidated about joining. I think I'm practically the least intimidating person on the planet.

If you do join, please introduce yourself with a post, and then you can go poetry crazy! 






As this community is just getting started, If you want to join, leave me a comment on this post.  I'll post an entry about myself && all, and then you can post one about you. :)

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